查看完整版本: 【欲望与烦恼】1-28 合集与感言

论坛里真是强人多啊
都是好文采
一直都想动笔写写的
又有点怕

回复 1楼 的帖子

一口气读完，感觉真的是酣畅淋漓，大大的文笔细腻委婉，描写内心丝丝入扣，活灵活现。肉戏也是恰到好处。简直就是淫而不俗的好作品！！期待大大的继续，呵呵，后面会不会有5p啊，看大大的安排，应该有哦！鼓励，期待中

终于又更新了，谢谢楼主，你别慢慢调味口嘛，快点更新，等不及啦，可不要搞到后面烂尾哦。

整合了全局，发现作者的写作手法真是很高明啊，尤其是王行之和苏蘅的第一次，将禁忌的情事用隐晦的手法写出来，有出尘之感，这样一来结尾处，苏蘅梦到自己成了一个海蚌，又梦到了一个小孩，就让人很怀疑这场性事到底是不是梦呢？特别是，作者最后又加了一句“是梦吧？”充满了悬念，让观众们久已期待的母子关系的转折点又打上了长长的问号。
这种写法是作者的高明之处，但也可能是回复不能让作者满意的原因，诸位满怀着热情来看进展，但到了最后和以前的什么“猎豹”“仙女”差不多，这次结尾变成了“海蚌”，曲高和寡，希望作者不要气馁，也希望文章的高潮阶段不会太远。

很久没有看到如此精彩的文章了，一口气全看完，希望楼主更新多一点:excellence

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看的热血沸腾啊，几个少年，几个少妇，促狭的青春，温婉的女人，受不了了。

很好的乱伦文，也不做作也不矫情，母子间的感情是一步步在生活的琐事中慢慢培养起来的，做作最后的那个春梦我想应该是为下面的母子真正的交和做铺垫吧

文笔很不错,故事也很吸引人,期待看到下一集啊

肥水不流外人田，文笔非常细腻，感情描写舒缓刺激。

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前半部分很好，最后那些章感觉有些赶了，各方面交待不是太清楚，情节进展过快。
最后看到了待续，希望还有继续更新吧。

追看中，希望楼主早日更新，色文也就喜欢这种题材的

其实个人感觉这个看想小说和看A片差不多，虽然这么比喻可能有点不太文雅。不过不得不承认。有时候确实就是这样。现在的小电影一上来就开始XXOO，那看着还有什么意思啊！所以不管是小说还是电影都要有个铺垫。循序渐进。一步一步慢慢来。而soulseeker兄的高明之处就在这里了。:excellence 行之不少一上来就把苏蘅给推到。先是通过肢体语言来试探妈妈会做出什么样的反应。然后在做下一步的打算。反过来，苏蘅对于儿子的一些举动，也是有起先抗拒到慢慢的接受。这本书里行之和他的妈妈感情戏是重中之重。他们之间的结合就是感情的升华。是那么的水到渠成。让人感觉一点都不会突兀。书中的另外一条线也是比较让人牵挂。在此，恭贺soulseeker兄进驻作者区。期待soulseeker兄的大作。

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一口气看完，非常吸引人，乱中谜情，迷中乱情，非常好看！

看文章的进程，应该是短篇吧。有点可惜，这么好的文笔应该多写一点啊

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