查看完整版本: 【好友的婚礼──「接新娘」奇遇记】(强口味重写版)作者:joanne_nam

net4killer 2011-7-8 23:43

好重的口味,那是构思很新颖,再接再历啊。就是女虐男的内容不容易吸引人,也不容易接受啊,最好多写点男虐女的文章

fengjianshehui 2011-7-9 16:59

好口味,不过小鸡鸡被烧成焦炭,想想就不寒而栗。

tjnanying 2011-7-9 22:47

写的还不错,尤其心理描述很细致。希望接着写的

c9711025 2011-7-10 00:16

口味是相当的独到,以为是楼主大干新娘之类的,没想到是被大干了。

super1900 2011-7-10 04:13

另类也不至于这样的另类法则,重口味我有点……

你哥呀 2011-7-10 07:17

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as219516 2011-7-10 07:20

看完原来是男性变装调教文不过男人大部分应该去用小弟弟征服女人吧,不应该过分沉迷调教的

zhangquan1z1z1 2011-7-10 10:02

一字一字的细致看完,觉得写的很好啊!故事情节设计的合理.尤其是在剧情的安排上,几次巨大的转折,令文章熠熠生辉啊.主角在可以干咏怡的时候,主角心理变化描写的十分到位,还有主角知道是计后的描写,都很好!从开始主角的心理一步一步的变化,到最后彻底失去做男人的本钱,写的真实生动~
小建议:最后不应该直接用火烧的,应该让小弟弟成为能看不能用的摆设,比如无限次的放精,放到无法勃起,彻底失去男人的功能!而不是用火直接烧掉因为烧掉了小弟弟连正常的生理活动都无法进行了.

ilovethc 2011-7-17 00:57

口味还好,只是没想到主角被烧JJ都不会反抗,要是真有什么把柄被咏怡这几个女人抓住倒还好说,只是纯粹的因为变装癖而陷入沼泽还好,但是到最后烧鸡就有那么点点不合理了。

zhuyuan119 2011-7-20 10:15

确实非常的重口味。感谢分享。  看是看完了。。。很耐人寻味

wy363695459 2011-7-20 23:19

这个我还以为是弄新娘的呢  看得我蛋疼啊  直接看软了

gzwrlrh 2011-7-21 17:38

可能个人原因  感觉这口味太重了  男的被女的调教? 我晕

grsfm 2011-7-21 21:04

口味的确很重,作者思维太跳耀了!看的我的傻了

jy14804 2011-7-21 22:12

让人充满幻想,情节紧张刺激,是篇很爽的文。谢谢楼主。

luciferzhou 2011-7-22 18:00

看的我蛋疼,屌硬,快射了都,求践踏求侮辱撒~多发点这样文吧 支持楼主哦

emaremar45 2011-7-25 16:02

越來越喜歡這裡了,每天一定有新的分享,感恩喔!! 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hermitlxf 2011-7-25 19:11

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cheyo1 2011-7-25 22:13

这么厉害 太可怕了 我可千万不能遇到这样的女孩

大脸猫猫 2011-8-1 22:27

切,我还以为是弄新娘呢,搞了半天是男的被虐啊,失望

ein1984 2011-8-1 22:46

太重口味了。不适合大众口味啊,还是穿插点温柔的
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